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This writer really likes to write about excrement. Cannot say I share his interest. However if you like torturing women into submission then this is for you. What bothers me is that every male in this book, regardless of age, is a big dicked ass hole. A poor representation of both sexes. 1 out of 5 (Stark47)

WOW! So good to have this author writing again. This story is a cracker with the character Daphne having all sorts of amazing stuff done to her and other women as well. I love the way that the author really gets into her head, and you really understand her feelings. After reading this story, I'd really like to be a pony girl. 5 out of 5 (Neva)

I had high hopes for this scenario, but I was ultimately disappointed. I have enjoyed Grail's writing in the past but I found this to be so shot through with viciousness that it was a complete turn off for me. When the punishments inflicted on the suffering girl become unbelievable then the prospect of sexual release is nonsense. Sorry I did not like this story and struggle to give it 2 stars. 2 out of 5 (Sooty)

Complicated and engaging plot, just a little too vicious for my taste,
but if you like that sort of thing it is well written.  4 out of 5 
(Sooty)

Pretty much the usual from this author. All the girls are submissives
who just have to be made to realize it.  A moderate tale of slave
training and submission.   4 out of 5  (Stark47)

Many years ago. When I was young, I belonged to a Master (an Arab
three times older than me), around whom a bunch of people from the
field of BDSM get organized in some way        . From time to time, he
used to organize an auction of his slaves (we were 4 slaves belonging
to him). The paradoxical feeling and the very complexity, during these
auctions  are well described in this story. Although the sales he
organized were completely different. This is the very thrilling memory
that this book immediately brought to me. So as for the ponygirl 
description.  As a ponygirl,  to my master I had similar motivational
encouragement awards, but not mechanical! Again, as for me, from my
experience since then, the feelings and thoughts were similar to those
described in this story. But for me, the whole mechanization is
unnecessary and undermines the credibility of the story, which
actually exists in the descriptions of the feelings. . Beyond that
this book, is well written and is exactly my type of cup of tea.
Although the subject of religion and the multiplicity of devices that
appear in this story, are not in my area of interest. My main point is
about the atmosphere, the amount of white slaves, their diverse areas
of exploitation and especially the racial revenge are definitely in
the area that excites me and that in this story are well highlighted.
. The excessive congestion, in my opinion, of devices whose purpose is
not productive but only for the purposes of exaggerated torture. So it
take off the score ,so my score will be only a 4/.
  4 out of 5  (Routhy)

The title is completely misleading; over half of the very short book is dedicated to a medical exam with mild BDSM, and we only ever see the POV character describing the pony play, never joining in. There's more focus on enemas than the pony elements. 2 out of 5 (UrbanSDA)