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Ok story and well written but the chapters are to short, no development of story. The characters/victims are just cardboard cutouts. The Doctor and his associate drug the victims turning them into zombies changing their personalities without effort on any ones part. There is no conflict and thus no emotional involvement on the readers part. The story concept/plot is very good but it is just to short to due it justice. 3 out of 5 (Stark47 )

Mind-control is not typically my favorite genre. However, as is true with all of this author's works, this is a tremendously arousing and fiendishly amusing tale of shame and humiliation. Devilishly imaginative, with steampunkish flourishes, it is a thoroughly entertaining and titillating book. 5 out of 5 (Nessa)

A good story of mental control with BDSM as the outcome. There wasn't much that was told about her tormentor besides his name. While I enjoyed the story and Emmas misfortunes I found the ending very unsatisfying. No resolution one way or the other. 4 out of 5 (Stark47)

should be noted that this is chapter one and that you need to purchase
another chapter or more to finish book  1 out of 5

My love-hate relationship with this author's work has, with this book,
slid solidly into hate. I've read two of her previous books and one
thing hasn't changed with this one: the author has a maddening,
idiosyncratic style of almost mindless repetition that nearly demands
that you skim rather than read. Here's a sample:

"Maggie had never been able to get over the development of Melody. How
she had been more advanced than her years. How she had been much like
herself. How her own breasts had popped when she was just twelve years
old. She would always remember that would Maggie. And how she hadn't
been at all surprised when Melody more or less followed the same
development path. Mature physically and with the mind always playing
catch up."

And it's not like this is a once-in-while for emphasis thing. It's
constant. The reading is a slog from start to finish. You might ask,
knowing this, why read her work?

Her previous books delivered in unique fashion lez-dom sexual control
and graphic torture with a pretty good look into the heads of torturer
and victim. Sadly, this is almost absent from this book. There's a
little teaser at the front and a bit at the end, but the middle is a
mind-numbing, boring yet grim look into someone going to pieces under
pressure. I kept waiting for the good bits that never came. Normally,
at the end of book, I'm sad and want more. At the end of this one, it
was, "Thank heaven, it's over."

The author took a short 70,000 word novel and cut into to novellas so
she can sell it as twice the prices. Maybe, just maybe, all the good
stuff is in Taken II? I want to know if I can permanently put this
author on my never-to-be-read-again list. I'm just not sure it's worth
another $7 to find out.  1 out of 5  (Aalok)

Good book. Storyline similiar to some of his other books but if you
liked them you will like this one.  4 out of 5  (SM)

Can't recommend this series.  There is too much time jumping which
leads to essentially a recap of previous pages. It isn't hard to
follow but terribly annoying. This is just a way to extend a short
story into a 2 book ramble.  1 out of 5  (Stark47 )

Another phycological treatise which adds nothing to a promising story. The idea is good but I don't care for the use of 5 paragraphs of exposition where 1 is cleaner, clearer and moves the story along. I doubt I will buy the the rest of the series. With some editing these three books could probably make one really good book. 2 out of 5