Hope Farm - The Ponygirl Diaries Book 1by DrkFetyshNyghts Published by: Fiction4All This book is written in English 
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 - Average 3.6 from 13 ratings
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I liked this story but some of the scenes could have been better
described and in places it felt a bit `samey`. If this is to develop
into a series the author needs to pay more attention to detail in
places and add more variation to the storyline. 3 out of 5 (hardman)
Depth of imagination and the word painted picture more than make up
for any inadequacies in this dark, intense tale. 5 out of 5
(LnylonsH)
Very hard but well written. 5 out of 5
The story is good, but there is too much talk and too little action
for such a small book. At 37 pages it is less than half the size of a
normal book. If volumes 1 and 2 were combined the result would almost
be a good value. The author needs to learn how and when to use
commas. 3 out of 5 (Sir Kaiser)
Boring...not interesting 1 out of 5 (Chicago)
A moderately interesting tale from author who generally does better.
The sections told by one of the victims comes off as very winey.
While that would be expected from the victims it doesn't help the
story any. Also the time jumping just adds to the confusion. 3 out
of 5 (Stark47)
| Style: Fem Dom - F/F, Sado-Masochism Published: 2 / 2010 Click Here For The Whole Series Available Formats to Download: MOBI, EPUB, MS Word, PDF, MS Reader, Text, RTF, Available for members to read online in the Reading Room which is part of the member library
| | STORY DESCRIPTION When her younger sister Maisie goes missing, Melissa begins a six month search for her, but she comes up with nothing. No leads, not even a hint as to where Maisie has gone, or why. Then out of the blue a mysterious break-through. A lead, a solid lead that she must follow. Beginning at a fetish party in the burbs, and leading to the secluded Hope Farm the mystery, and horror unfolds. Maybe, just maybe it would have been better if Melissa hadn't chosen to follow the lead. With hindsight, maybe just maybe she should have just let her sister go. What Hope Farm would reveal could not be imagined in hers, or anyone's worst nightmares.
A story of pre-meditated capture and fetish slavery at the hands of an advanced and capable female sadist. Maisie hadn't been the target at all. It had always been planned to suck in Melissa. Maisie had just been the bait. | Keywords related to this title - click on a keyword to find more, related stories Lesbian Bi BDSM fetish latex leather Submission domination orgasm
denial Author information: "DrkFetyshNyghts writes her hard hitting stories almost as crime novels. The BDSM, the Fetish and the Bondage being the crimes along with the impunity with which the perpetrators operate. This, together with an autobiographical feel and forensic attention to detail, adds a distinctly jagged and disturbing edge to the narrative." Reviews I liked this story but some of the scenes could have been better described and in places it felt a bit `samey`. If this is to develop into a series the author needs to pay more attention to detail in places and add more variation to the storyline. 3 out of 5 (hardman) Depth of imagination and the word painted picture more than make up for any inadequacies in this dark, intense tale. 5 out of 5 (LnylonsH) Very hard but well written. 5 out of 5 The story is good, but there is too much talk and too little action for such a small book. At 37 pages it is less than half the size of a normal book. If volumes 1 and 2 were combined the result would almost be a good value. The author needs to learn how and when to use commas. 3 out of 5 (Sir Kaiser) Boring...not interesting 1 out of 5 (Chicago) A moderately interesting tale from author who generally does better. The sections told by one of the victims comes off as very winey. While that would be expected from the victims it doesn't help the story any. Also the time jumping just adds to the confusion. 3 out of 5 (Stark47) |
