I love ponygirl/boy stories but this one is a bit too tame. The
captives retain their humanity too easily and the action is virtually
consensual.   3 out of 5  (NickC)

Excellent story, as expected. Very creative, and well done. A real
throbber for sure!  5 out of 5

An interesting new setting with several newly enslaved couples. I also
enjoyed the connections to the author's previous Talistaun series but
the story stands on its own very well.  5 out of 5  (Jason)

Husband and wife couples in bondage, humiliation and forced into
training side by side is my absolute favorite thing! This book nailed
it X3 and I’m anxiously waiting for part 2. Please keep this one
going Mr. Dowd.  5 out of 5  (Timmy)

I couldn’t get enough of this one, another spellbinding story in
Dowd style. I reread the ‘conjugal’ scene at the foreign prison
several times. I actually found myself feeling for the suffering
couples even though my joystick was at full attention! Per the
author’s request for feedback, yes, I want more, bring it on.  5 out
of 5  (Rick)

Well written and stimulating. Could have used a little more action at
the very end.  4 out of 5  (Mr. pushup)

Linda became a polarizing character for me. Caught in irreversible
circumstances, her surrender into lesbianism as an enslaved sex toy
for her captors was enjoyable. The only thing that could have made
this story better was if during the ringing scene, the husbands were
forced to pierce their own wives nipples, before allowing the ladies
to return the favor.  5 out of 5  (TD)

Very good read  5 out of 5  (Hadult)

The book was very good really like this authors work  5 out of 5 
(darren)

A real PLEASURE to read! Nicely paced and well thought out.
Recommended for sure.    5 out of 5  (DD)

A bit boring unless you like pony stories.  3 out of 5

excellent interracial domination/forced sex.  Missing some forced
intimacy, but pretty good fun  5 out of 5  (traveler)

Excellent!   5 out of 5  (Edsubject)

Another fantastic Talistaun installment and filled with erotic action!
I'm voting for 1 more story to conclude the series.  5 out of 5 
(Jason)

 Not quite as good as the earlier books in this series but still
rating a 9.0 out of 10! Definitely recommended.  4 out of 5  (Eljay)

Another compelling read in this series. One or two more books to
finish it would be great. Eagerly awaitting the next installment.  5
out of 5  (dave)

A well written B&D story that's highly entertaining. The slave barns
only get more exciting and imaginative with each book. I enjoyed this
one as much as the preceding in the series. Highly recommended for the
lovers of intense BDSM and forced training.       5 out of 5  (MW)

Good 5th book in the series. Story has progressed very well to date  5
out of 5  (Esthercat)

This book was well worth the wait! I hope the next doesn’t take so
long. The sex slave and breeding barns were my favorites. The whole
Talistan series has been extrordinary.   5 out of 5  (Dano)

From an avid fan of W.L.’s work, I thoroughly enjoyed this fantastic
story of intensely humiliating domination and tight bondage! Please
join me in clicking on the “Like this Book” button next to this
book in your library bookshelf. I want to see this author recognized
for his imaginative story telling.  5 out of 5  (Dom)

did not finish the book  1 out of 5  (hadult)

Would like to see more of this series. Great reads.   5 out of 5

I loved this installment of W L Dowds exciting series.  Great action
scenes and characters that keep me wanting to read more.   A wonderful
read.  5 out of 5  (ann)

I think this series has run it's race. There is too much tedious
repetition and not much adventure.  3 out of 5  (Fred)

Well written with interesting characters.  There is little sex in
these books other than the torturing of female cunts.  The author
seems somewhat obsessed with this practice, and it limits the story
somewhat.  Excellent characters, good plot.  With some variety in the
sex, for which this saga has ample opportunities, this series could be
fantastic.    3 out of 5  (Bigrdr)

W.L. Dowd has once again delivered a very strong tale of captive sex
slaves enduring the harsh desires of the Talistaun regime. The
characters are forced to endure a wide variety of humilating acts for
their masters. This is a story not to be missed by fans of the series!
 5 out of 5  (Jason)

The author's at the top of his form...NOT TO BE MISSED!!  5 out of 5 
(Eljay)

A phenomenal installment in a great story. The action and details were
so engaging, I couldn’t put it down. DON’T make us wait so long
for the next!  5 out of 5  (JK)

A 5++ in my opinion. Thoroughly enjoyed the Courtroom action.
Something about that kind of formal subjugation that really excites
me. And the husband and wife scenarios were outstanding! Waiting
anxiously for part 5.  5 out of 5  (Dan)

Great book again, as expected. The action continues to sizzle and the
characters are well written.  W L Dowd delivers a fantastic story with
each installment of his Talistuan series.  I am definately looking
forward to seeing the nex exciting segment  of this great series.  5
out of 5  (ann)

A highly commendable MASTERpiece by this author. Exciting and very
pleasurable to read. Very much looking forward to the next volume.  5
out of 5  (tom)

Good story up to author's typical standard.  3 out of 5

Exactly as expected! Incredibly stimulating if you get my drift....
Another 5+ book for this author.  5 out of 5

the firs 3 books in this serie desserved a 5/5. But the twist in the
end of the third ruined the best part. From there, and toward book 6, 
there is no more novelty, a lot of "déja vu" and no more thrill.  2
out of 5  (titou)

As great as his previous books..the whole series is superb.  5 out of
5  (Eljay)

A fantastic new installment to the series!  This is a must read for
fans of W.L. Dowd as the story escalates with many exciting twists!
Highest recommendation!!  5 out of 5  (Jason)

Coming from a big W.L. Dowd fan; this was a highly anticipated book
for me, and it did NOT disappoint!  The author did a fantastic job
keeping the story fresh and exciting while adding a very surprising
twist in the plot. I can’t wait for the next one!!   5 out of 5 
(JK)

Excellent installment in this great series. Nicely writen and
provocative plot. The story is set up for another book which I very
much look forward too.   5 out of 5

I’ll reserve my GREAT rating for the end of the series, but this has
been a fabulous series of B&D books and well on its way to being one
of the best Ive read. An exceptional value and comprehensive read in
todays adult erotica world.   4 out of 5

A++ an excelent story that I was drawn into and feelt part of. I'm
very partial to tit torture  and humilation so this one is a gem for
me!  5 out of 5  (dan)

Wow! Another great read from a master storyteller.  This series
sizzles with fantastic action and torment for the unfortunate
captives. I am really looking forward to seeing what the action next
story unleashes.  5 out of 5  (ann)

cant wait for the next part. keep up the good work  5 out of 5 
(readerdav)

It's OK. Gets hot. Even has a sense of humour about it.  5 out of 5

Great stuff, looking for more. Unusual but very exciting plot.  5 out
of 5

Story is getting better but I can’t help wondering where in Texas
they found Diamond mines.  I knew that Heather would get enslaved
sometime. That being the nature of these stories.  Rather predictable
so far.  3 out of 5  (Stark47 )

A bit of a different genre for this author, but I still enjoyed it!
It’s well written and an intriguing story to say the least. For
those looking for a read as this is advertised, I’m sure this will
be a big hit.  5 out of 5  (DD)

The male puppy training was unique compared to anyting Ive read
before. A recommended good read. Also enjoyed the brief pony girl
action. Look forward to part 2.  4 out of 5  (Tami)

I enjoyed this book. It was a great read with an interesting take on
slave training.   The puppy training in this story is different from
what I've found in puppy play stories before.  The ponygirl and
ponyboys  added extra spice to the story.   5 out of 5  (ann)

Arousing story and pleasurable fem-dom read. Lots of room for a great
sequal.  4 out of 5

Really enjoyed this book. Great story.  5 out of 5

This story is a different flavor from the author's previous
publications but still well written and sure to please fans of this
particular subject.  5 out of 5  (Jason)

Finally, a high quality well-conceived story of MALE enslavement,
domination and perfect blend sexual torment, with a touch of female
action mixed in! W.L. Dowds style clearly coming thru in the delivery
while what I must assume is Vanessa Londons vision leads the way. I
hope to see more from these two authors.  5 out of 5  (JK)

I could not put this book down.  Well written and entwrtaining.  I am
looking forward to sequeals and more from these two o
authors, they make a great team.  5 out of 5  (cat)

Started well then finished rather tamely.   3 out of 5  (NickC)

Three good main characters, nice supporting group, good, bad, good
meaning, greedy. I liked and hope to see a hole  series come after
this.  5 out of 5  (FSG)

It really does not get any better in the 3rd part of the story of a
wife being down loaded into a specifically modified Gybot body.  She
is moderately tortured and then the story shifts to another ?real?
Gybot who is actually sympathetic and it does not return to the main
characters. Mostly it appears that a 4th part was planned but never
written. Do not waste your time and money.  2 out of 5  (Stark47 )

Starts Slow.  2 out of 5

some strange breaks and repeats but overall a very good novel  4 out
of 5

GREAT....even stronger, more imaginative and detailed than the
previous installment, with a very welcome focus on personal
humiliation and degradation which raises it to another level of
quality!   5 out of 5  (Eljay)

An exceptional sequel to the first part of this series. New characters
are introduced to the story creating so many new possibilites for
future installments. Many scenes of humiliation and subjugation by the
Talistuan will keep the reader on edge until the very end! Highly
recommended to all!  5 out of 5  (Jason)

A BIG thumbs-up for this one! Not only is it an incredibly exciting
and imaginative novelette, but it really pulls you into it as you
begin to truly feel character’s state of mind and anguish.  5 out of
5  (Dano)

Excellent story! Not to be missed by the lovers of bondage,
enslavement, sexual torment, humilation and more. I'm sure the
Talistaun's work is not done yet. I'm very much looking forward to
more.   5 out of 5

I liked the first book better than this but I am sure i will enjoy the
next episode.  4 out of 5  (JBC)

A solid "A" rating for this one. I hope to read more about the
breeding barn and slave training adventures in the next.  5 out of 5 
(MB)

Even better than the 1st book. Wow, this author can spin a tale that
hits at the core of my kinky interests like no other. I strongly vote
for a part 3.  5 out of 5  (JK)

This book is another fantastic installment in a great erotic series. 
The varity of scenes with sex,frustration, humiliation, light bondage,
and torment is the best on the market.  The characters and plotline
allow for many different things to go on.  It is a must read.  5 out
of 5  (nessasue)

Truly enjoyed the escalating story and creative writing. I found the
slaver teams new weapon of abduction particularly intriguing. I’d
like to see a couple of the captives turned over to the Colonel and
his men, perhaps as payment for services rendered.   5 out of 5 
(dom1)

Nicely written and cock throbber to read. The new characters are
great. I realy enjoy the husband and wife abductions that are weaved
through the story. I'm certainly looking forward to more in this
series.  5 out of 5

A good follow-on to the first book.  4 out of 5

A Great Read Looking forward to reading more from this author  5 out
of 5  (ojim)

An excellent story. Very much looking forward to more Talistan
adventures.  5 out of 5

I would like to see another episode! I hope Dowd continues, with the
lady milkers now transferred for breeding.  5 out of 5

Generally good sequal.  4 out of 5

This is an outstanding book.  The first chapters about the milking
barn is the best ever about human cows.   I think Dowd is the best
writer around.  I anxiously await reading his new books.  5 out of 5 
(Chicagossl)

good follow on from previous instalments.  5 out of 5  (Fred)

Provocative and intriguing story line. Nicely paced with engaging
twists. Everything you would expect and more. If you enjoy what the
title suggests and the synopsis, I highly recommend it.  5 out of 5 
(slaver)

Loved it! Excellent continuation of the story, looking forward to
more! I agree with the 1st review, if this genre of book excites you,
trust me, you won't be disappointed.  5 out of 5  (MR)

In the latest book of Julie and her family's enslavement, Dowd
continues to leave the reader on the edge, never knowing the fate of
any of the slaves the Penns own.  The invention of new methods to
encourage submission in combination with the attention to detail
brings the reader in the room where the scenes unfold.
The writer continues to visit moments and places from previous novels,
reminding us how we got where we are in this latest installment of a
great series
A great read.   5 out of 5  (sk)

A very good series. Well worth reading. When will you be writing the
fith book as I would like to know who is the woman in black and what
awaits her.  5 out of 5

Some of the most imaginative bondage and creative torment I've read in
a while. A great series of ebooks!  5 out of 5  (trek)

Wow, and what I expected.  5 out of 5  (tc)

Very good. Have thoroughly enjoyed all the volumes in this series.
I've really started to connect with the entire family and thier
ordeal.  5 out of 5

plodding, unrealistic  2 out of 5

Good read. Could be a little longer. Good five knuckle shuffle
novelette.  5 out of 5  (Mr.pushups)

“Unrealistic” really??? Did this person really not know what they
were buying? This was another great story in true W.L. Dowd style. Not
the best book in the series but still top shelf material.   5 out of 5

A fun read  5 out of 5

The story continues and maintains my interest but still mild.  4 out
of 5  (Stark47)

Hard hitting as always, this is a worthy continuation of the first
part. Some places of the story didn't quite flow as they usually do
with Mr Edwards but still a highly enjoyable read.  4 out of 5 
(Hardman)

An awful lot of time spent on the main male character's thoughts.  2
out of 5  (scooby)

This little Latin Colonel, transform those English arrogant
aristocratic women into total slaves.
They filled all and any orders from their master, with no further
thought and / or hesitation because they’d recognized that, if they
let themselves think too much about things, then they’d say or do
something that would earn them more pain and that was one thing
they’d had far too much of. They no longer thought of themselves as
the Honorable English Ladies -Richmond, but as his cunt’ or
‘slut’ or whatever other name he wanted to call them. Theirs
function was to please him and absorb his spunk or sometimes his piss
wherever he wanted to put it; they were a body with holes and hands
who had been conditioned from having to please to wanting to and
regarding any orgasm they were given as a gift from theirs god. They
didn’t know it, but the thoughts and theirs state of mind weren’t
entirely all of theirs any more but father of theirs master.
  4 out of 5  (Ruthy)

Best book 2 books on the breaking of slaves I have read.  Generally I
don’t like punishment-only books.  This has both sex and the
punishment all leading to surrender.  Well done!  Needs a third book
to finish the story of Vicky and Mary!  5 out of 5  (Bigrdr)

Wish I could give this more than five stars. The three stories have
just gotten better and better with each one.

This one has some delightful torture scenes in it and the author has
provided a really good plot.

In answer to his question at the end of the story - please can we have
a part 4 and a part 5!  5 out of 5  (hardman)

I loved the daddy / daughter scene while mom was forced to watch,
great stuff.  The torture methods used to break down the girls were
very descriptive and thrilling to read.  Definitely the best of the 3
books to date.  I do hope to see another story with these characters
and the Korean twins who showed up at the end!  5 out of 5  (MB)

YES, more please! I would like to see another volume in this series. 
If you like the whole mother, daughter, sisters, tortured into
submission and slavery, you’ll LOVE this book, I certainly did.  It
was the perfect next step from the earlier stories about these women. 
  5 out of 5

Excellent story, I can't wait for the next book.  Maybe you could have
them have breast enlargement, turn them into prostitutes, or work as
strippers.  5 out of 5  (spanker)

FANTASTIC a great story line and well told. It ended too soon for me,
I wanted more. It was a cock throbbing action packed story of torment
for these poor young girls. I encourage this author to continue on
with this familys peril!!!  5 out of 5  (s4u)

Another well written piece of work by Dowd.  I enjoy storys of women
suffering in hard bondage, and I really loved this one!  More intense
than the last book, but that’s good these women were due some more
severe punishments.  I thought they got off a bit easy in the last
novel.  And I continue to enjoy the masterful way new key characters
are brought into the storys.  I think moving Julie and her daughter to
the Penns sex slave rental stable would make a good plot line. Please
continue.  5 out of 5

Like to see a 4th. Maybe a some pony tng or other comp      5 out of 5

An excellent book, creative and descriptive. This familys abduction
and torments throughout the series of books has been very exciting to
follow. The whole premise of beautiful and well endowed women being
tortured into submission and slavery is right up my alley.  5 out of 5

Story dragged  2 out of 5

Excellent volume in this outstanding Julie Abduction series!!!  5 out
of 5

I really enjoyed reading this book.  4 out of 5  (Rama Sama)

The best in this series, so far. And as several others I am enjoying
this series quite a bit.  5 out of 5  (ojim)

Too much of the same style and stuff in the series.  Not bad writing,
but limited ideas and lacks fear!  1 out of 5

A fabulous follow-up to Julie's Nightmare! A beautiful family of women
in hard bondage, what more can you ask for! I'm moving right onto the
next book in this series.  5 out of 5

simply because there is no higher number available.  Simply superb
humiliation and painful BDSM   5 out of 5  (D)

Good third installment for the series.  Still a bit mild for my
tastes.  4 out of 5  (Stark47)

Beware...can only be read with microsoft reader; now an  unsupported
format. Shouldn't be offered with such limited access. Rated 1 because
of this.  1 out of 5  (campbellab)

Decent read.  A bit superficial in characters and their interactions. 
Could have been longer with some more details.  Good sex scenes.    3
out of 5  (Bigrdr)

Nothing like the first one. Very disappointing.  1 out of 5